Attached is the first draft of our film. However, now we have this canvas of the corrected flow of narrative in our film, we need to now gain audience feedback for constructive criticism as well as shorten it down to be in the specific timing frame we are allowed; 5 minutes approximately. Despite us at the minute being happy with the product, we still feel some bits are weaker then others and we will try and adapt them to therefore improve them or delete them and then work around the deleted part. This process we feel is best by going through the film chronologically and cutting shots down to the best they can, as well as deleting parts where we feel aren't strong enough or don't fit the detailed narrative.
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